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the purpose is too buy chocolate milk, right? I think the audience will be for kids and teenagers. You combine the voice with sound effect pretty cool. The voice was not the same. Like one loud and the other is normal. I think this will make other people not understand what is the purpose is. You should make the purpose more clear.
ReplyDeleteThis doesn't sounds like an ad, to be honest. Aimed at children, but I gotta say, it's boring. You need some fun sound effects and funnier dialogue. Make it better next time!
ReplyDeleteIf I could make a change, I would definitely add more fun sound effects.
ReplyDeleteI think that the purpose of this ad is to sell a chocolate milk. I think that the idea to sell the chocolate is good however, the whole add is a little hard to understand. I think that the audience is hikers or people who live in cold regions. Main age group is adults from 20 - 30 and old people age 60-70. I think that the sound of winter was really good and the transition was good. I think that the whole advertisement is a little hard to understand, and there has been some empty space at the end. At the beginning of the ad, the voice was lower than the others. I also think that they should find some sound effects, instead of making them with their own voice. I think that one suggestion would definnately be to speek clearer so that it's easier to understand.
ReplyDeleteOh my god. It was awsome! I remembered some parts of it from when we were at your house. :)) It fulfilled its purpose telling people to buy an AC. People who buy the air conditioner are middle- aged people, right? Great work. I liked the echo and how they were in the desert. Some echos are not really neccesary, though, but still. I love it <3
ReplyDeleteyour purpose is not really clear, it's kind of not fufil the purpose and I can't understand what's it mean. It's chocolate milk or air conditioner?! I think the audience for this ad is chocolate addict-or or person who like to drink milk and want to try add flavor =).
ReplyDeleteYour ads is work well in transitions and sound affect, it's also interesting :D. But your purpose should be clear, I and my group members were almost lost what are you guys talking about in your podcast.
I would prefer that you should make the content more clear. Like conditioner should not be in cold desert, RIGHT! because it's already cold!!. You should add something real into your podcast. By the way, you should focus more who is your audience and add more sound affects
Sorry for saying this but I can't understand the purpose of this ad. Maybe it's because some part people talks not loud enough. The audience is kids and maybe teens, right? But, the plot sounds a bit boring (you should add more sound effects that goes along with the talking) and off the track of your purpose (you focus too much on the Gods). Also, does your ad even had sound effects and music? I can't understand the later part of the plot very well. By the way, are you selling chocolate milk, or air conditioner?
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